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CheekyGuy
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Post Alice in Home Land
on: February 28, 2011, 04:10
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Alice watches, through her bedroom window down below as her mother heads down the driveway, getting into her car.

Alice coughs and splutters, as she places a tissue over her mouth to contain the mucus from a chest infection she had been having all week. For the meantime, she's happy that school's out, well for her anyways.

Closing her curtains to block out the blinding light, she leaps off the bed, flicks on her Playstation 3 and picks up her pad.

The Playstion welcome screen and the XMB bar appears, hitting a D Pad she scrolls over to the Joypad Icon for GAME and shortly scrolling down she notices the HOME Icon.

'What's this?' she wonders.

Cautiously she hits the X button. As a first time user, she has to download it. She groans.

Alice watches as the Loading 'Progress bar' crawls across the screen.

Slowly, but surely, she drifts off to sleep..

Her Controller clatters onto the floor.

Her eyes awaken, everything at first is a bright blurr.

She is wearing a beautiful pink dress.

'Where the hell am I?' she ponders.

She finds herself laying across a serene beach, she looks down to see a yellow ball roll toward her. She startles as she can see it playfully smiling up at her.

'Don't hurt me' She cries.

The Loco Roco standing in front of her only giggles.

Alice's shoulders gently droop down.

She dusts the sand from her legs as she rises, getting a better view of her surroundings. A beautiful serene desert island.

She walks over to the shoreline, and dips her feet into the water, she kicks at it playfully.

Alice looks over to her new found friend. 'Where am I?'

The Loco Roco looks up at her and giggles. She hears the sound of laughter from other Loco Rocos joining her too.

Alioe becomes nervous once more. There is a tense silence.

Then the Loco Roco's sing in Unison 'You are Home, Home'
as they slowly advance toward her.

Alice's arms cover her face as she lets out an ear splitting scream.

Alice finishes screaming and takes her arms away from her face. A Handsome Nightclub dancer in a smart jacket and shoes bumps into her. She looks around to discover shes now in a Singstar place. 'I'm sorry' The Niteclub dancer smiles sheepishly 'I didn't know where I was going'

Alice stares around the crowded space, then turns her attention over to the night club dancer.

'Can you tell me where i am?' Alice asks him.

The Nightclub dancer replies 'Just Home I guess'

Alice smiles and dances with him, 'he seems an alright guy'
Suddenly Alice falls face first toward the dancefloor but the Nightclub Dancer catches her. She quickly passes out.

Alice wakes onto a bed in an unfamiliar places. Neon blue against Metal. She looks across to see a beautiful being with deep blue eyes, but with no hair. She is staring into the face of a 'Homeling'. She flinches and pulls up the duvet to her chin.

'IT's OK' THe Homeling soothes her. 'We mean you no harm'

Alice, shaking replies 'where am I? where are you taking me?'

The Homeling replies 'When you were well enough, we were going to take you Home'

The word 'HOME' reverberates in her head. She becomes dizzy again and passes out.

Alice finds herself face first in her bed.

Her mother calls out from downstairs as she stands at the doorway, keys in hand and a bag of Take Out food in the other 'Honey I'm Home!'

Across from Alicee, her TV Screen displays the message 'Game Loaded..Install?'

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Post Re: Alice in Home Land
on: March 1, 2011, 20:59
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Wow, this was a great story. Please keep them coming.

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Post Re: Alice in Home Land
on: March 6, 2011, 00:46
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Very very interesting Cheeky, great fun!

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