Comments on: Oh The (Home) Spaces You Will Go

By: Susan

Susan — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 22:35:59 +0000

OMG Seal…to funny..lol

By: Burbie52

Burbie52 — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 22:33:01 +0000

LOL Seal!! Too funny!

By: SealWyf

SealWyf — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 21:25:05 +0000

Wonderful, Olivia! I appreciate the mention.

Perhaps your next Seuss-channeling could be “Horton Hears a Noob”:

Please don’t give up! I believe it is true:
A person’s a person, no matter how new!
And you very new persons should do more than dance
Right on top of my face, wearing red default pants.

By: johneboy1970

johneboy1970 — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 19:11:18 +0000

Considering the usual, long-winded way
I reply to the things that others say
Four paragraphs I use for even light reflection
My short response applauds your poetic perfection

By: johneboy1970

johneboy1970 — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 19:02:52 +0000

HA!

By: Susan

Susan — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 18:14:30 +0000

I have a friend who is a dork
when she eats she uses a spork
for she has no fork
when she eats pork
or watches Mindy and Mork

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 17:20:54 +0000

What have I started, what do I see
Burbie taking the time to rhyme back at me
I know I can’t do this till the day that I die
My bucket is empty the rhyme well has run dry
Ringing brain to find words that will fit
Has crossed both my eyes and made yell Oh poo…What?

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 16:53:20 +0000

A 1 word comment, he said “Awesauce”
Now I have to find words for which Im a loss
Now looking back I should have ought
Taken some time and given this more thought

By: Burbie52

Burbie52 — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 15:47:43 +0000

The fact that you’ve taken so much of your time,
to answer each person with a new silly rhyme,
shows all of us the kind of talent you’ve got.
even though many times you say you do not.
So continue to write here with no reservation,
for we all love what you do with true adoration,
you have the ability to make us laugh and cry,
and that is something that money can’t buy!
A dork you may be but we all love you still,
so stop apologizing and continue to fulfill,
the lives of those here who know that you care,
for you take us to places that few others dare.

Love ya Oli !!

By: johneboy1970

johneboy1970 — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 02:35:47 +0000

Awesomesauce!

By: Susan

Susan — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 18:05:14 +0000

Dork

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 18:02:18 +0000

Rhyming each reply to the comment ya’ll have written
May have exposed my behind to, how you say, getting bitten
Just enjoy what you read like eating pie with a spork
But please understand that I am a dork
So if you dont get a reply to you comment in rhyme
Know I would if I could but it takes so much time
I will do what I can, thats all I can do
But if I miss you please know that Im still thanking you
Each comment is awesome and I love all of them
Thanks for taking the time and visiting me on HSM

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 17:34:46 +0000

Though the words are so good and have such great timing
I have not the talent for such awesome rhyme rhyming
The original is much better and that being said
Im glad that you liked reading my adaptation you just read
Google the title to read what Seuss made
Better yet, buy the book so he will get payed

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 17:19:58 +0000

There is still a kid in all of us no matter our age
Imagination runs rampant as you see on ever HSM page
With controller in hand and your butt in a chair
You have what it take to reach out and to share
So if you sit there and wait for the right time to blossom
Come grow with us on Home , you’ll see that is awesome

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 17:09:46 +0000

If it gave you what you needed, and I hope that is true
Then it did just exactly what I hoped it would do
If you really do like it, read it more then just twice
And tell all your friend, the hit count would be nice
No really the winning isn’t why I shared what written above
I just thought it fitting for this virtual world that I love

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 16:58:10 +0000

Though the poem has some wit and humorous part
The message is deeper between the ending and where it starts
But if it makes you smile then its job has been done
It makes you thing but in a way that is fun

By: Olivia_Allin

Olivia_Allin — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 16:46:45 +0000

Thank you so much for these kind words you say. I glad that you liked and have a great day.

By: tbaby

tbaby — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 15:53:29 +0000

WOW Olivia! This is amazingly creative and hella cute! Can you write a rhyme like this for me to read to my daughter some time? I was reading this out loud to her and she was giggling. Loves it! TYVM!

By: Burbie52

Burbie52 — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 12:26:10 +0000

Dr. Suess would be proud Olivia! That was a great retake on one of what I consider to be one of his best books for children. I think it is a good reminder that Home can appeal to the child in all of us! Home is so whimsical and weird at times that you have to set aside your adult belief and let your imagination in, something that we as adults many times give up as we get older. Home can be something that sparks our imaginations and revives its use in us all. Well done!

By: Jersquall

Jersquall — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 07:27:07 +0000

Thanks! I needed that! Yay!